My name is Ofa and I am a year 7 student at Panmure Bridge School. Well done on having your punctuation in your sentences, lots of people forget to do this. The thing I like is that you have written some interesting words like inducted, influential and occupations. I think next time you should add photos so people know what who Bob Dylan is and what he looks like.
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Kia Ora Ryan
ReplyDeleteMy name is Ofa and I am a year 7 student at Panmure Bridge School. Well done on having your punctuation in your sentences, lots of people forget to do this. The thing I like is that you have written some interesting words like inducted, influential and occupations. I think next time you should add photos so people know what who Bob Dylan is and what he looks like.
Do you enjoy being digital and blogging your work?
From Ofa
thanks
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